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秦胜?李振沙?

1 秦胜?李振沙?
READY4黑骑士2014-02-14 02:44:28 发表
丫头,妳错乱了吧?怎么这两人跑来这里打酱油捏???哈哈哈哈哈!
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丫头的腐女世界2014-02-14 17:48:16 发表
 回复:1楼READY4黑骑士 的原贴:
我那会确实有点混乱,是哪一张来着!
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READY4黑骑士2014-02-15 00:36:12 发表
 回复:2楼undefined 的原贴:
嗯,好几个地方,没记错第话就是从第二部第一章开始,后面还出现秦朗。。。不过我才看到第十九章,而且中间他俩好像没有再出来打酱油了。
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READY4黑骑士2014-02-15 15:36:35 发表
 回复:2楼undefined 的原贴:
Since we are on the subject, I just want to also let you know that sometimes you mix the names up between the characters of the same story. For example, “Liu Xiao Shao“s reaction is making Liu Xiao Shao“s heart race“ when the second Liu Xiao Shao should be Xu Lang. This happened with Qin Sheng and Er Sha as well... I hope you are not upset. I just think your writing is pretty good so it should be as bug-free as possible. \(*^oo^*)/ \(*^oo^*)/ \(*^oo^*)/
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