Hi, I really like this story because it“s very hard to find story with main character as seme while most stories“ main character are uke. The main character is very sweet and strong. And I like how creative the main character is and the way you write it just nice. What I“m not really satisfied is just the main character doesn“t show much interaction with his children... it might be nice if you can write the main character has one to one moment with each child. but this is your story... so of course it“s up to you how you want the story to be. anyway very good story ^___^
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